Attached is all of the raw text from a Google Doc draft of my resume. Something that I am curious to get initial feedback on is: first, let's just start with the sentences that are two lines of text itself for an 8.5 x 11 page document. Let's interrogate how we could possibly shorten those sentences so that they actually fit on one line, while still maintaining a lot of the resume structure that I want for each of these bullet points. This would include some sort of measurable number or assessment of the impact of the bullet point being talked about, along with some sort of estimation of the scope of that impact in the role provided. Go ahead and list out each of the two long bullet points and suggested ways of shortening them. Give me at least three possibilities for each bullet point that vary the types of things you are focusing on so that I can make a better choice about the final bullet points that I rewrite into my resume.
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