Good: Good eye contact, really clear elements of your story, and very clear and good values that the interviewer can link back to you. And your doubts shows your vulnerabilities too and your accountability of improving yourself. That's a really cool choice. I do like the tying-back-into engineering by talking about your creativity.
Could be improved: More linear storytelling, (you kind of jump back and forth) also good job on talking about what's important to you (family, education, following in your father's footsteps) but I'd just narrow your scope a little in order to better understand you and how you got here. Gesture more! It can help your story a lot. Also, make it more concise, even though I like knowing this about you, if you can.
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